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I used Indesign to create my content sheet so I can get the layout right since you can add slug and columns. Indesign is also good to use since it is an industry standard which is what we need to create a magazine that could actually be sold. You use in different files so I could put this work on the internet and print it out it would be the same. 

Here I am using the rectangle tool to create boxes.

Here I am selecting boxes to import pictures

Here  I have imported the pictures into the contents page, having pictures related to what will be on the pages is a technique used by professional magazines to help the reader understand what will be on the page

Here I have inserted all of the text for the contents page using the text tool, this tells the reader what will be on each page.

I used these folders to make sure my version control were write so I didn’t lose the work and I wrote the dates that I save them so I could tell the new version from the old versions. This help me say organised.

LO1: Font Styles

I like the font Precious as it fits the style of the Magazine and the band. The other fonts do not fit the style of either the band, the magazine or both. This font has a light touch to it which is great because the are a mainly an acoustic band so it has a fancy and light to it. The other fonts has hard font which you could associate with a rock back.

LO3: Contact Sheet and evaluation

Useable photos.
I want to use these photos since they are clearest and unblurred photos *Image with sunglasses* this image will be used for my double page spread. I am going to edit it so that it is black and white except for her face, which will remain in colour. The location was chosen because the peace gardens with is know by the city.These photo's all fit the style of magazine as all of the models are teenagers, all wearing dark clothes and all look like members of a punk band.The other other with the different lighting is candid shot of a band performing which is good for my magazine so you see what they would be like performing. 

Non useable
These photos are unusable because some of them are blurry or the photo's themselves are at a strange angle.

LO4: Magazine Drafts

This came be improve with boxes on the letters. There aren't any graphics or slugs with are convection that I should have included in my magazine. The best part of my magazine is the main cover image since it has the audience gaze as well as giving the audience ideal self/partner. This is a best because my image is of a female which a lot of magazine have males on the cover so it show female empowerment. This image is great because the artist isn't being sexualise which lots of magazine do. 

This could be improve with straightening out of the social media and the text boxes of the titles to be the same so it looks more standard in the layout. I think the best is images because it nice look in the DPS.

This Magazine page could be improved by less writing and more picture so they are break in the writing. This could may be improve if I use a back ground image and had the writing on the image. 

Some of the best parts of my magazine page are images of black and white since it look indie which it show the band genre of music. The interviewer colours on the writing so it clear show who saying what. 

LO4: Exporting final magazine pages

LO4: Client and focus group feedback

This shows the focus group was based around my target audience.

This shows that it was mainly females taking this survey. This is good because my target audience is female

This shows that the magazine receives an average rating of 4.25 out of 5.

This shows people liked the band interview, masthead, pictures and the information in the magazine.

The only negative comments from the survey is that the photo's should be dispersed throughout the magazine and that the text should be broken up from the large books.

The feedback show that my strength are the band interview, masthead, pictures and the information in the magazine. The only suggested improvements are increasing the interviews, to spread out the photos so that it look more space out and breaks up the texts so it doesn't become a book and to straighten out the social media line.

This is improvement that my client of SPH Publishing. The Publishing company said that my strong points are photography and the masthead and my interview. The Publishing company has also told me to add Headline to introduce the article and add main headline coverline. As well editing the columns size for my DPS.

LO4: Evidence of Editing

CONTENT PAGE

My editor didn't like my first attempt at a cover page because the picture had the band facing away from each other.  Also the layout was the best because it need to work with the column. She also didn't like the column spacing is too small.  She suggested I move the boxes that had the photos in to one side and add the text down the other side.  

I did this and I added the social media logos in black at the bottom.  My editor then said the social media logos need to be in their original colours.  I've added more photos and text and I've also added my masthead at the top. The layout in the final was best since it had columns and space which make it better for the reader. 

The first picture is the blank piece of paper and the second one has my plan of where everything is going to go.  The third picture is where the test the of article was added. The fourth picture is where the questions were changed from black to red text. In the fifth picture, I moved the text around so that I could incorporate the name of the band and the photograph.  These appear in the sixth and final picture.  I wasn't able to add more photographs because it interfered with the formatting and I also think adding more pictures would take attention away from the words and the words of the article are more important.

This is my cover page.  It has my masthead on it and a photograph of the lead singer of Calling Angels.  It also has a list of the other bands appearing in the magazine. I resized the photograph and cropped it to get rid some of the background and extra people.I use the Texts box to get the writing.